idea two

this idea is substantially less developed than the first, but I think it might work as well. It would mostly take place from the point of view of someone in a hospital bed, and his friends would come in and tell him how bad he looks and that he might die. Then his wife would come in and tell him that she just knows he' s going to pull through, then his girlfriend comes in and tells him that she moved on without him. or something to that effect. this one is probably easier to make, which is important but the other one might have more "potential".